Wednesday, 24 May 2017


WALT use a technique to carefully craft our writing

If I had listened, if I wasn’t bullied, if I didn’t get upset then this wouldn’t have happened.  I was scared, terrified and hated myself because of what I had done. A teacher was hiding while I was lying on the ground, paper flying around me, a crack in the wall, lockers broken. Quickly I walked down the corridors for the last time.I feel scared.
My body is shaking; face turning red; crushing my fists.I ran out of the building but then ….

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